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What do you plan to do this weekend

What do you plan to do this weekend 0ApnG
Job means a paid position of regular employment. Since I am currently a student, I’m not associated with any paid position but I’m connected with a few organizations through extra-curricular activities. As I have been playing a few roles in that particular organization through extra-curricular activities so I have to complete some responsibilities there like a job. I can call all of my curricular activities my job during my student period. All activities in particular organizations teach me the organizational culture as well as developing my skills. I think extracurricular activities are the basic type of programme which prepared a student according to organizational culture. It's more flexible for a student if they learn organizational culture before they enter an organization. It’s a pleasure for me that I have got a few opportunities to learn from those organizations who are teaching about organizational culture before entering any kind of job.
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Job
means a paid position of regular employment. Since I am
currently
a
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student
, I’m not associated with any paid position
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but
I’m connected with a few
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organizations
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extra-curricular
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activities
. As I have been playing a few roles in that particular
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organization
through extra-curricular
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activities
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so
I
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have to
complete
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some
responsibilities there like a
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job
. I can call all of my curricular
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activities
my
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job
during my
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student
period. All
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activities
in particular
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organizations
teach me the
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organizational
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culture
as well
as developing my
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skills
. I
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extracurricular
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activities
are the basic type of
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programme
which prepared a
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student
according to
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organizational
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culture
. It's more flexible for a
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student
if they learn
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organizational
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culture
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before
they enter an
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organization
. It’s a pleasure for me that I have
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got
a few opportunities to learn from those
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organizations
who are teaching about
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organizational
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culture
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before
entering any kind of
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job
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IELTS essay What do you plan to do this weekend

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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