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What do you like to do? And why?

What do you like to do? And why? w7E1l
I like to play football because it is exciting and fun. We should always play football because it helps us to improve our physical fitness and we can also be mentally fit. And also football is very exciting game as you get to kick a ball which feels so good. I also play football because I am a big fan of Messi and Ronaldo who are among the best football players in the world. They inspire me to get up in the morning and to follow my goal: to become a football player.
I like to play
football
because
it is exciting and fun. We should always play
football
because
it
helps
us to
improve
our physical
fitness and
we can
also
be mentally fit. And
also
football
is
very
exciting game as you
get
to kick a ball which feels
so
good
. I
also
play
football
because
I am a
big
fan of Messi and Ronaldo who are among the best
football
players in the world. They inspire me to
get
up in the morning and to follow my goal: to become a
football
player.
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IELTS essay What do you like to do? And why?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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