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What do you like to do? And why?

What do you like to do? And why? w7E1l

I like to play football because it is exciting and fun. We should always play football because it helps us to improve our physical fitness and we can also be mentally fit. And also football is very exciting game as you get to kick a ball which feels so good. I also play football because I am a big fan of Messi and Ronaldo who are among the best football players in the world. They inspire me to get up in the morning and to follow my goal: to become a football player.

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