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what disadvantages are there in a society where the gap between rich and poor is very large

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Many disadvantages are there in a society where the gap between rich and poor is very large. First, the difference between rich and poor lead to many society problem. For example, Poor people are the low income group should they will be impacted on behaviour of poor people such as theft and robbery. Beside, the inequality will not exist about education, living condition and anything happen in society. My conclusion is the country want stronger growth, the goverment should findsolution. Even though in a society, the gap between rich and poor is very big.
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IELTS essay what disadvantages are there in a society where the gap between rich and poor is very large

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
94 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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