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What can governments do to protect endangered species of animals?

What can governments do to protect endangered species of animals? werrr

Every animal has a vital role in the ecosystem and losing even one of the parts contributes to the disturbance in the ecosystem. so, elimination of endangered breed with ecosystem their effect can lead to the severe damage. To prevent this disaster, governments should set out some measures. Firstly, the governments pass legislation and Prohibit Harassing wildlife. They should arrest and convict people who poaching and trapping a threatened animal into captivity. Another measure involves getting on the preservation of wildlife habitat. To do this, urban sprawl and development, in general, must be put to a halt to reduce the destruction of animal habitats, which is a directly major cause of species loss. In conclusion, animal extinction can have serious ramifications for the environment. to prevent it, governments need to both preserve habitat and punish offenders effectively.

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