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what can be said about bad nutrition in USA.

what can be said about bad nutrition in USA. PVoOE

They refer to average percentage of saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA. Sodium is mainly taken with dinner, and saturated sat is also taken with dinner. However, added sugar is different to others. it is mainly taken with snacks. The common point is that breakfast does not contain big percentage of these nutrition. It could mean that American people do not have breakfast a lot. It is often said they just have cereal and milk. That is reasonable, I think. A surprising point is that snacks contain more nutrition than all of breakfast. These three nutrition are not good for our health if eaten too much. Therefore, American should learn that snacks contain bad ingredients more than any other meals. Especially regarding sugar, it is most contained in snack, which could make gain weight. American people should take more care about how much snacks they have to control their health.

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different
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it
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big
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people
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often
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just
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think
. A surprising point is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withteamorselrefreshmentlunch
snacks
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all of breakfast
. These three nutrition are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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, American should learn that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withteamorselrefreshmentlunch
snacks
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bad
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snack
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make
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much
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snacks
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have to
 control their health. 