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what benefits of traditional crafts can bring to locals

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There is no doubt that traditional crafts is growing popular at many parrts all over the globe and I think it can bring a wide range of undeniable benefits to local. Firstly, it not only provides numorous employment opportunities for local people buts also improve the creatively skills beacause they can be sold to the customers or invesstors if their products meeted the requirement and overall quality. Secondly, traditional crafts is associatedwith many places of interest. , thí also contribute to development tourism industry. Therefore, it can attracts a number of hliday makers and beautify the image ò tradition. For instance, there are many craft villages lin Vietnam like Tay Ho conical hat village, Ha dong silk village and so on. In brief, these benefits of traditional crafts can make many profit to locals
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it can bring a wide range of undeniable benefits to local.
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makers and beautify the image ò tradition.
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, these benefits of traditional
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IELTS essay what benefits of traditional crafts can bring to locals

Essay
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1 paragraphs
133 words
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