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in some countries difference between parents and child

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In my nations, some individuals think that there is a large gap in relations of parents and wards in today's advance world as compared to earlier. In my point of view, there are some benefits of formal statement. So, in this essay, i will discuss about advantages of age gap between children and parents. To begin with its pros, first and foremost, as parents are older, they become mature and have to know about finances. Moreover, guardians become able to handle family matters as well as they know about what's good and bad for their love ones. In addition, with age gap of parents with their children, forerunners can invest more in their their young age without any worry of children. Hence, today's generation give more time for preparation for themselves. On the other hand with cons, age gap leads to conflict between parents and children because both have different thinking. Sometimes, wards feel embarrassed with their parents because parents look older. In the nutshell, merits are more powerful than dimerits. So, this tend should be followed.
In my nations,
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some
individuals
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think
that there is a large
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gap
in relations of
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parents
and wards in
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today
's advance world as compared to earlier. In my point of view, there are
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some
benefits of formal statement.
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So
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will
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discuss about advantages
of
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age
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between
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children
and parents.

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begin
with its pros,
first
and foremost, as
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parents
are older, they become mature and
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have to
know about finances.
Moreover
, guardians become able to handle family matters
as well
as they know about what's
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good
and
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bad
for their
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love ones
.
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, with
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age
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gap
of
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parents
with their
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children
, forerunners can invest more in
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their their
young
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age
without any worry of
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children
.
Hence
,
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today
's generation give more time for preparation for themselves.

On the other hand
with cons,
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age
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gap
leads to conflict between
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parents
and
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children
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because
both have
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different
thinking.
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Sometimes
, wards feel embarrassed with their
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parents
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because
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parents
look older.

In the nutshell, merits are more powerful than
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,
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IELTS essay in some countries difference between parents and child

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
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