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What are the various purposes of museums? What are the ways to fund them? Should government Fund them?

What are the various purposes of museums? What are the ways to fund them? Should government Fund them? J3akk
Museums play a vital role in keeping the history alive. Today a varieties of museums are established. Such as art museum, utensils museum, doll museum, coins museum, etc. But why? To let the future generation be in touch with our previous history. Museums are tributes to the innovations and creativeness of our ancestors. The artefacts preserved in museums represent the fundamentals of what we are today and what we have today. A very simple example could be coins that ancestors used are still being used; though there are some modifications, the idea was originated thousands of years ago. However, maintaining a museum is quite challenging. Not just to keep the ancient artefacts in their best conditions but also museum's infrastructure requires a lot of spending. It is definitely undoubtable that a person or two cannot maintain a museum forever, even if he is the richest among all. Some other ways to collect funds for the maintenance can be; charging reasonable entry fees, selling replicas of some famous antiques or artefacts present in the museums, online advertisment or by arranging funding camps. All of the above mentioned ways may allow to collect adequate funds. But it is not certain that everytime the collected funds are adequate. Hence, there should be an alternative option, which in my view is government. Infact, government is already funding the museums and I believe it should continue to fund in order to keep the bond between history and future generation unbreakable. To conclude, I would say that the existence of museums are dependent on local public. Today they are with us only because we make efforts for the same.
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a varieties
of
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are established
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museum
, utensils
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, doll
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museum
, coins
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museum
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why? To
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let
the future generation be in touch with our previous history.
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Museums
are tributes to the innovations and creativeness of our ancestors. The
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artefacts
preserved in
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museums
represent the fundamentals of what we are
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today
and what we have
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today
. A
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modifications, the
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idea
was originated
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, maintaining a
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museum
is quite challenging. Not
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to
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keep
the ancient
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in their best conditions
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also
museum's infrastructure requires
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a lot of
spending. It is definitely
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undoubtable
that a person or two
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cannot
maintain a
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museum
forever, even if he is the richest among all.
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Some
other ways to collect funds for the maintenance can be; charging reasonable entry fees, selling replicas of
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some
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famous
antiques or
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artefacts
present in the
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museums
, online
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advertisment
or by arranging funding camps.
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above mentioned ways may
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allow
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to collect
adequate funds.
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it is not certain that
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the collected funds are adequate.
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, there should be an alternative option, which in my view is
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government
.
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Infact
,
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government
is already funding the
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museums
and I believe it should continue to
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fund
in order to
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keep
the bond between history and future generation unbreakable.
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, I would say that the existence of
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museums
are dependent on local public.
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Today
they are with us
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only
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because
we
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make
efforts for the same.
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IELTS essay What are the various purposes of museums? What are the ways to fund them? Should government Fund them?

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