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What are the types of pollution, its affect on the environment and possible solutions? Explain your ideas with relevant examples.

What are the types of pollution, its affect on the environment and possible solutions? Explain your ideas with relevant examples. 7aPEX
Pollution has always been a major concern in most of the developing countries because of the increasing infrastructure. This causes pollution and thus, degrades the environment. In this essay, I will focus upon water and air pollution, its impact on aquatic and human life followed by possible solutions such as proper disposal of industrial waste and planting of trees. Firstly, the primary reason for water pollution is industrial waste in nearby rivers. The industries produce a lot of toxic wastes in its production and pollute the nearby river which disturbs the aquatic life. For instance, in North East India, according to the native fishermen, every year there has been a tremendous increase in the number of dead fishes because of the inadequate industrial disposal, which is their primary source of food. Secondly, the air quality is getting poorer because of the inevitable demand in vehicles which cause lungs cancer and other respiratory diseases. Furthermore, in Delhi, it is observed that during the harvest time, the air quality degrades which further results in severe health issues, especially to children. Therefore, the solutions could be; Firstly, the Government has to plan methods of industrial disposal in order to safeguard the environment. For instance, there should be a edicated place or land where the waste could be accumulated. Secondly, the working class should opt for vehicle pool policy, so that there would be fewer vehicles on road. Additionally, planting of trees should be motivated among all the generations, so that the people could get clean air to breathe. To conclude, water and air pollution have always impacted our environment. Therefore, not only the Government but also the people should take the responsibility to safeguard the environment by helping each other.
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has always been a major concern in most of the
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developing countries
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because
of the increasing infrastructure. This causes
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pollution
and
thus
, degrades the
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environment
. In this essay, I will focus upon water and
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air
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pollution
, its impact on aquatic and human life followed by possible solutions such as proper disposal of
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industrial
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waste
and planting of trees.

Firstly
, the primary reason for water
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pollution
is
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industrial
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waste
in nearby rivers. The industries produce
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a lot of
toxic
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wastes
in its production and pollute the nearby river which disturbs the aquatic life.
For instance
, in North East India, according to the native fishermen, every year there has been a tremendous increase in the number of dead fishes
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because
of the inadequate
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industrial
disposal, which is their primary source of food.
Secondly
, the
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air
quality is getting poorer
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because
of the inevitable demand in vehicles which cause lungs cancer and other respiratory diseases.
Furthermore
, in Delhi, it
is observed
that during the harvest time, the
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air
quality degrades which
further
results in severe health issues,
especially
to children.

Therefore
, the solutions could be;
Firstly
, the
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Government
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has to
plan methods of
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industrial
disposal in order to safeguard the
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environment
.
For instance
, there should be
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edicated
place or land where the
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waste
could
be accumulated
.
Secondly
, the working
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class
should opt for vehicle pool policy,
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so
that there would be fewer vehicles on road.
Additionally
, planting of trees should
be motivated
among all the generations,
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so
that the
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people
could
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get
clean
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air
to breathe.

To conclude
, water and
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air
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pollution
have always impacted our
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environment
.
Therefore
, not
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only
the
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Government
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but
also
the
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people
should take the responsibility to safeguard the
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environment
by helping each other.
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IELTS essay What are the types of pollution, its affect on the environment and possible solutions? Explain your ideas with relevant examples.

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4 paragraphs
287 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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