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What are the positives and negatives of playing computer games on children?

What are the positives and negatives of playing computer games on children? GM9eg
It is observed that these days children start playing computer games at the age of 4. So, does it have positive or negative imapact? Well, computer games can have advantages as well as disadvantages. This essay will state positives and negatives of playing computer games. While some children benefit from playing computer games, others might adapt the negatives of it. Playing computer games develop the analytical ability of children by analysing various situations and acting upon it to move forward in the game. Children increase their concentration while playing computer games. In games like car race, player has to concentrate on other player moves maintaining own speed and strategy which also incorporate multi-tasking capability in them. In multi-player games, children increase their communicaton skills and become sociable. The most loved and played online game PUBG which gained a lot of popularity is a great example of connecting varied communities to each other. Moreover, children become a good team player when playing such games. Although there are a lot of advantanges of playing computer games, there are harmful effects that need consideration. Computer games can become addictive to some children who end up spending all their time in playing games with less or even no study at all. This leads to low performance of children in their academics and they lose on important information required to shape their future. Outdoor games are less played by children more into computer games which impacts health of children making them obese and less active. Also, child brain developmenent is effected adversly by playing computer games. Computer games as illustrated above have good and bad effects on children. I would like to highlight that it is important for children to have balance between playing computer games and other modes of play both indoor and outdoor. Parents should help their children to use their time effectively which help them to grow in future and have better lifestyle.
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that these days
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playing
computer
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at the age of 4.
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, does it have
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positive
or
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imapact
? Well, computer
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can have advantages
as well
as disadvantages. This essay will state positives and negatives of
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playing
computer games.

While
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some
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children
benefit from
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computer
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games
, others might adapt the negatives of it.
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computer
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games
develop the analytical ability of
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children
by
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analysing
various situations and acting upon it to
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move
forward in the game.
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Children
increase their concentration while
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playing
computer
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games
. In
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games
like car race, player
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has to
concentrate on
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other
player
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moves
maintaining
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own
speed and strategy which
also
incorporate multi-tasking capability in them. In multi-player
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games
,
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children
increase their
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communicaton
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skills
and become sociable. The most
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loved
and played online game PUBG which gained
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a lot of
popularity is a great example of connecting varied communities to each
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other
.
Moreover
,
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children
become a
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team player when
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such
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. Although there are
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advantanges
of
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playing
computer
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, there are harmful effects that need consideration.

Computer
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can become addictive to
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some
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children
who
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end
up spending all their time in
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playing
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games
with less or even no study at all. This leads to low performance of
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children
in their
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academics and
they lose on
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important
information required to shape their future. Outdoor
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games
are less played by
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children
more into computer
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games
which impacts health of
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children
making them obese and less active.
Also
, child brain
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developmenent
is effected
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adversly
by
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playing
computer games.

Computer
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games
as illustrated above have
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good
and
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bad
effects on
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children
. I would like to highlight that it is
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important
for
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children
to have balance between
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playing
computer
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games
and
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other
modes of play both indoor and outdoor. Parents should
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help
their
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children
to
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use
their time
effectively
which
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help
them to grow in future and have better lifestyle.
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IELTS essay What are the positives and negatives of playing computer games on children?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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