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What are the challenges of travelling?

What are the challenges of travelling? EpbDr
There are some obstacles related to travelling. First and foremost, nowadays Covid-19 has a significant effect on people all over the world. People have to care about their health by wearing the face mask and disinfecting stuff all times especially when they are on a trip. The second point is that losing identification documents and money can destroy all the journey. We have to give our ID-card to hotel in order to they accept us and if we lost it, they won’t allow to us in order to stay there. Plus, we need money to enjoy our tripe for example buying handicrafts, eating traditional food, visiting museum or natural beauty spots.
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obstacles related to travelling.
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and foremost, nowadays Covid-19 has a significant effect on
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people
all over the world.
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People
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have to
care about their health by wearing the face mask and disinfecting stuff all times
especially
when they are on a trip. The second point is that losing identification documents and money can
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destroy
all the journey. We
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
give our ID-card to hotel in order to they accept us and if we lost it, they won’t
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allow
to us in order to stay there. Plus, we need money to enjoy our tripe
for example
buying handicrafts, eating traditional food, visiting museum or natural beauty spots.
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IELTS essay What are the challenges of travelling?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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