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What are the best ways of learning about another culture?

What are the best ways of learning about another culture? PVLAp
Our world is so diverse; even more than you might think. There are so many different cultures with different customs and traditions that it is almost impossible to get to know every one of them. Human beings are destined to contribute to their uniqueness and independence. As far as I'm concerned, it is rightly being a member of your culture that sustains your wellbeing and balance. That's why I think it is hugely important not only to be familiar with your own culture, which you are fond of, but also to acquaint yourself with other cultures. But how can we ensure the reliability of the information which we come across during this process? Which learning methods should we use? First of all, taking a course about the culture in order to enrich yourself seems to be a very good option, but will it fulfil the main aspect which is to become more knowledgeable? Provided that, you are taught by a teacher which has the skill to make the learning process more enjoyable. On the other hand, this method could be ineffective when it comes to the practical approach. It is very unlikely that if you touch or see something alive you will forget it and that's exactly what this course cannot deliver. Secondly, having visited the country which has the specific culture would be more desirable and could bring amazing achievements in terms of the knowledge, but it can be time-consuming and very costly. To sum up, none of these options outweigh the other. It mainly depends on the personality. From my point of view, every person should be able to determine which way of familiarizing with the culture would bring them the highest results.
Our world is
so
diverse; even more than you might
think
. There are
so
many
different
cultures
with
different
customs and traditions that it is almost impossible to
get
to know every one of them. Human beings
are destined
to contribute to their uniqueness and independence. As far as I'm concerned, it is
rightly
being a member of your
culture
that sustains your
wellbeing
and balance. That's why I
think
it is
hugely
important
not
only
to be familiar with your
own
culture
, which you are fond of,
but
also
to acquaint yourself with other
cultures
.
But
how can we ensure the reliability of the information which we
come
across during this process? Which learning methods should we
use
?

First of all
, taking a course about the
culture
in order to enrich yourself seems to be a
very
good
option,
but
will it fulfil the main aspect which is to become more knowledgeable? Provided that, you
are taught
by a teacher which has the
skill
to
make
the learning process more enjoyable.
On the other hand
, this method could be ineffective when it
comes
to the practical approach. It is
very
unlikely that if you touch or
see
something alive you will forget it and that's exactly what this course cannot deliver.

Secondly
, having visited the country which has the specific
culture
would be more desirable and could bring amazing achievements in terms of the knowledge,
but
it can be time-consuming and
very
costly.

To sum up, none of these options outweigh the other. It
mainly
depends on the personality. From my point of view, every person should be able to determine which way of familiarizing with the
culture
would bring them the highest results.
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IELTS essay What are the best ways of learning about another culture?

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285 words
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