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What are the advantages of learning English?

What are the advantages of learning English? dreJd
As everyone knows, English is a global language and about one hundred countries in the world use English as their mother tongue. The opinion that should people learn English or not, has been receiving a great deal of public attention. To be honest, I completely agree with this and my essay below will now shed some light on this point of view. To begin with, learning English may be conducive to your future. First of all, people who know English tend to have well-paid jobs, so they are likely to have many great employment opportunities. For example, today, because a large number of international companies have set up in our country, they require their staffs have to know English. In addition, when people can cooperate with foreign businesses, they might progress rapidly in their career as well as acquire experience. Second of all, when you know English, you can easily communicate with everyone, especially foreigners thus you could also widen your network. If you work in an international corporation, English will be able to help you to build a strong relationship with others; moreover, you can make a strong impression on them. Furthermore, additional major advantages of learning English are helpful to learn other foreign languages and have a chance to live abroad. English is not only one of the easiest languages to learn but also mastered you will have developed abilities, enhanced skills. Therefore, these skills can transfer to any other language that you learn. Additionally, since English is quite similar to French or Latin, learning English can set a base to learn other languages. Another benefit to English learners is easier to travel, study and live overseas, which supports they to have a deeper insight into other countries’ cultural and broaden perspectives of those countries. When people know English, they are likely to study overseas that assist them to acquire knowledge and even try various studying environment. In conclusion, English is the most used and practical language in the world and it does wonders for human life to some extent.
As everyone
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, English is a global
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language
and about one hundred
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countries
in the world
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use
English as their mother tongue. The opinion that should
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people
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learn
English or not, has been receiving a great deal of public attention. To be honest, I completely
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agree
with this and my essay below will
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now
shed
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light on this point of view.

To
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with, learning English may be conducive to your future.
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First of all
,
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people
who
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know
English tend to have well-paid jobs,
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so
they are likely to have
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many
great employment opportunities.
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today
,
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a large number of
international
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companies
have set up in our
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country
, they require their staffs
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have to
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know
English.
In addition
, when
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people
can cooperate with foreign businesses, they might progress
rapidly
in their career
as well
as acquire experience. Second of all, when you
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know
English, you can
easily
communicate with everyone,
especially
foreigners
thus
you could
also
widen your network. If you work in an international corporation, English will be able to
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help
you to build a strong relationship with others;
moreover
, you can
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make
a strong impression on them.

Furthermore
, additional major advantages of learning English are helpful to
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learn
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other
foreign
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languages
and have a chance to
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live
abroad. English is not
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only
one of the easiest
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languages
to
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learn
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but
also
mastered you will have developed abilities, enhanced
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skills
.
Therefore
, these
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skills
can transfer to any
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other
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language
that you
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learn
.
Additionally
, since English is quite similar to French or Latin, learning English can set a base to
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learn
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other
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languages
. Another benefit to English learners is easier to travel, study and
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live
overseas, which supports they to have a deeper insight into
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other
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countries’
cultural and broaden perspectives of those
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countries
. When
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people
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know
English, they are likely to study overseas that assist them to acquire knowledge and even try various studying environment.

In conclusion
, English is the most
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used
and practical
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language
in the world and it does wonders for human life to
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some
extent.
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IELTS essay What are the advantages of learning English?

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4 paragraphs
342 words
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