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What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread usage of social media?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread usage of social media? bYX9l

Social media use can affect users' physical health and physical health even more directly. It promotes negative experiences on the ones’ physical health and cause for disease such as deteriorated eyesight and lack of movement. On mental health, it affects the ones’ mentality and mind bringing depression, anxiety, loneliness and even suicidal toughts for teenagers particularly. To sum briefly, millions of people’s health has suffered because of the social media.

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