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What are specialties of Tay Ninh? What are ways to advertise those specialites to tourists travelling to Tay Ninh

What are specialties of Tay Ninh? What are ways to advertise those specialites to tourists travelling to Tay Ninh pKGaa
The name sounds simple, but to produce those delicious salt grains, the workers here have to go through a lot of meticulous and elaborate processing. In addition, to salt and shrimp, an equally important ingredient is chili. The ripe red peppers are meticulously selected, then left to dry slightly. The second ingredient is shrimp, selected from dried shrimp, the most important requirement is clean and dry salt is the main ingredient, it is required to be a type of salt that is processed cleanly. Chili and shrimp are pureed, mixed with salt in a certain ratio, added other spices such as garlic, lemongrass, … Then, put everything in a pan and roast it evenly, this is an important process. Important determinants of salt grain quality. Workers must watch the fire and roast them evenly so that the salt has a brick color as well as the characteristic aroma of shrimp salt. Shrimp salt is an item the many tourists choose as a gift for their loved ones when coming here. That simple, rustic dish has become a unique feature in culinary culture, becoming more and more famous adding a rich flavor to the life of Vietnamese people
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to produce those delicious
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salt
grains, the workers here
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have to
go through
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a lot of
meticulous and elaborate processing.
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, to
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salt
and
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shrimp
, an
equally
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important
ingredient is chili. The ripe red peppers are
meticulously
selected, then
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left
to dry
slightly
. The second ingredient is
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shrimp
, selected from dried
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shrimp
, the most
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important
requirement is clean and dry
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salt
is the main ingredient, it
is required
to be a type of
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salt
that
is processed
cleanly
.

Chili and
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shrimp
are
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pureed
, mixed with
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salt
in a certain ratio,
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added
other spices such as garlic, lemongrass, … Then, put everything in a pan and roast it
evenly
, this is an
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important
process.
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Important
determinants of
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salt
grain quality. Workers
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must
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watch
the fire and roast them
evenly
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so
that the
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salt
has a brick color
as well
as the characteristic aroma of
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shrimp
salt.

Shrimp
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salt
is an item the
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many
tourists choose as a gift for their
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loved
ones when coming here. That simple, rustic dish has become a unique feature in culinary culture, becoming more and more
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famous
adding a rich flavor to the life of Vietnamese
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people
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IELTS essay What are specialties of Tay Ninh? What are ways to advertise those specialites to tourists travelling to Tay Ninh

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
196 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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