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Harsh punishment from government is necessary or not to control over the road accidents. Agree or disagree.

Harsh punishment from government is necessary or not to control over the road accidents. Agree or disagree. RRp0o
since the past rush driving has been major problem in the cities of the most nations. A number of people believe that government should not impose the strict actionto control over the road accidents on the contrary in my opinion it's unfair, authorities must do and it's more convenient way for improving the road safety. Firstly, if strict actions are not there public ignore the trafficrules, breaking the signals and over speeding because they don't have any fear of legislative action as it's relaxed by government. Secondly, society start driving in the influence of alcohol and might be loose the command as a consequence they may crush innocent one or get collide the other wagons eventually resulted into the permanent disability or losing the life. Finally, with the lack of harsh trouble from government they start driving on their own prospect and proper pattern of driving should not be followed. This will result into traffic and people suffer a lot in everyday life. Also, we can't ensure whether pollution is controlled or not due to the fact they will ignore the pollution mitigationrules for example do not inspect vehicle periodically, fixing loud horns etc. On other hand, certain group or individuals believe that harsh torture is not necessary. We can achieve safe road environment by awareness programs that can be either run online or conducting the physical seminars. In addition, we can make feel shy to individual when brakes the traffic rules for example by giving welcome flower. By outset educate and aware public they also be the responsible towards such things. In brief, according to my view to batter control over traffic accidents and ensure road safety a set of harsh punishment should be imposed which I elaborate in above paragraphs.
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accidents
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in my opinion it's unfair, authorities
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do and it's more convenient way for improving the
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safety.
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driving
in the influence of alcohol and might be loose the command as a consequence they may crush innocent one or
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get
collide the other wagons
eventually
resulted into the permanent disability or losing the life.
Finally
, with the lack of harsh trouble from
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government
they
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start
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driving
on their
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prospect and proper pattern of
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driving
should not
be followed
. This will result into traffic and
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people
suffer a lot in everyday life.
Also
, we can't ensure whether pollution
is controlled
or not due to the fact they will
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ignore
the pollution
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mitigationrules
for example
do not inspect vehicle
periodically
, fixing loud horns etc.

On other hand, certain group or individuals believe that harsh torture is not necessary. We can achieve safe
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road
environment by awareness programs that can be either run online or conducting the physical seminars.
In addition
, we can
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make
feel shy to individual when brakes the traffic
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rules
for example
by giving welcome flower. By outset educate and aware public they
also
be the responsible towards such things.
In brief
, according to my view to batter control over traffic accidents and ensure
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road
safety a set of harsh punishment should
be imposed
which I elaborate in above paragraphs.
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IELTS essay Harsh punishment from government is necessary or not to control over the road accidents. Agree or disagree.

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