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lnlernolionol lrovel mokes peopre Neiudiced rother lhan broodminded. Whot ore ils couses ond whoi rneosures con be loken fo solve lhis problem?

lnlernolionol lrovel mokes peopre Neiudiced rother lhan broodminded. Whot ore ils couses ond whoi rneosures con be loken fo solve lhis problem? EwAqr
A generation ago, the majority of the populace was considered extremely well-known to handle the situation as a foreign person. However, in many parts of the world, few of the populations think that the humans who are about to visit from another country make them prejudiced than broad-minded. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is that culture and tradition which different in other nations. It feels like disrespecting their beliefs and going to be challenging to survive there without knowing it. In India, For Example, we need to remove footwear outside the temple before visiting it. The solution is for this is that while touring to other regions, it is better to appoint a guide who helps to explore. Another issue is that food which plays a role in travel. That is to say, the person who makes a trip has to deal with a wide variety of meals which lead to food poison and wastage without information of it. Such as, In Yemen, numerous people face hunger due to a lack of a proper healthy diet. To tackle this issue, pupils who finished their food remaining meals have to donate to those who are in need. A third cause of the concern is that impolite with others not giving attention while explaining rules and regulations of the place and arguing with them. As a result, it leads to criminal activities and makes them pay penalties. Such as Museums, In India, For instance, In some of the traditional places taking pictures is prohibited. The way forward could be to give attention to the guidelines and be polite to who you speak. In conclusion, foreigners are not well-known as people from other regions due to reasons such as culture and tradition, food, and being impolite with colleagues. It is a serious problem, and unless we can get more guidance and well planed to explore. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with their parents and the government.
A generation ago, the majority of the populace
was considered
extremely
well-known to handle the situation as a foreign person.
However
, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
parts of the world, few of the populations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that the humans
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
are about to visit from another country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them
Use "(prejudiced)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
prejudiced
than broad-minded. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose
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some
solutions.

One of the main causes of the problem is that culture and tradition which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
nations. It feels like disrespecting their beliefs and going to be challenging
Did you mean "surviving"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to survive
there without knowing it. In India,
For Example
, we need to remove footwear outside the temple
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
visiting it. The solution is for this is that while touring to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
regions, it is better to appoint a guide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to explore.

Another issue is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
which plays a role in travel.
That is
to say, the person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
a trip
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
deal with a wide variety of meals which lead to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
poison and wastage without information of it. Such as, In Yemen, numerous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
face hunger due to a lack of a proper healthy diet. To tackle this issue, pupils
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
finished their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
remaining meals
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
donate to those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
are in need.

A third cause of the concern is that impolite with others not giving attention while explaining
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations of the place and arguing with them.
As a result
, it leads to criminal activities and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them pay penalties. Such as Museums, In India,
For instance
, In
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
traditional places taking pictures
is prohibited
. The way forward could be to give attention to the guidelines and be polite to
In a formal text, use "whom", not 'who'.
who
you speak.

In conclusion
, foreigners are not well-known as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
regions due to reasons such as culture and tradition,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, and being impolite with colleagues. It is a serious problem, and unless we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more guidance and well planed to explore. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with their parents and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
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IELTS essay lnlernolionol lrovel mokes peopre Neiudiced rother lhan broodminded. Whot ore ils couses ond whoi rneosures con be loken fo solve lhis problem?

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6.0
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