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what all are necessary to get good health

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“Health is wealth” is a famous quote used to said by our elders. Health makes to stay happy, comfortable and peaceful. Unluckily, in modern days, increased industrialization and urbanization causes health problems due to increased use of vehicles in turn causes increased pollution and fumes. In this busy world people also not caring about their health because of busy schedules and increased work pressure. In my view, we have to focus on food and daily exercises to maintain our health. Food is main source from which we are getting more disease. Due to lack of time, we are not eating fres. . .
“Health
is wealth” is a
famous
quote
used
to said by our elders.
Health
makes
to stay happy, comfortable and peaceful.
Unluckily
, in modern days,
increased
industrialization and urbanization causes
health
problems due to
increased
use
of vehicles in turn causes
increased
pollution and fumes. In this busy world
people
also
not caring about their
health
because
of busy schedules and
increased
work pressure. In my view, we
have to
focus on food and daily exercises to maintain our health.

Food is main source from which we are getting more disease. Due to lack of time, we are not eating
fres
.
.
.
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IELTS essay what all are necessary to get good health

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  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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