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What a pencil deal with us in our lives?

this is a pencil. İt has many different types. You can write with it, can hold your hair like japans. The most popular pen is Nasa's pen. İt is built for use in space in the space ships and international space station. This pen always writes in any condition. İt can write in no gravity, it can write in big pressure. And in the space, these are very important about living in the space. şsdfkshfgdlhkgf k lslkhslh klakf lkhlk lkfshlksfhlkf khlk hlksh slkhlks lkhlk shk lhklgkhl skhlk lkslhkghketğRGHŞ Ğ APKH SĞH PİGŞHİ SŞ P MHŞLSİŞHAPSŞ MSKH İŞLHİPTOHKS LMŞLHMSTOHKŞ MSTA TOH PATK HŞLSMH, KSTĞP ALMPLĞAT A, TK, KTKHLATĞHKTKHĞPSLTÜĞL ĞPĞAOJT HPTSOKHPOTHPTOHI POKTPOYP AOSTPHJSKTHPST PIPTKPSOJT, ÜARTGPOTPOJPROYJPAÜROTPİHJAPDOJPAERJKFPPA JPRJP TJPHRGAPO, ĞK KAĞRJARJTPIRJOA RIJP oorıj ıjapj poporja POJ GPIJSPTJ Pjt ptj pajpt japP PHPOTJHAP YPOpoj pj5yjs t pjP p jt p, TJYIAI PAPo psoypyırıjorıtjoıtjroı yoıjroıjreoıytroıyhj
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ships and international
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station. This pen always
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in no gravity, it can
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in big
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. şsdfkshfgdlhkgf k lslkhslh klakf lkhlk lkfshlksfhlkf khlk hlksh slkhlks lkhlk shk lhklgkhl skhlk lkslhkghketğRGHŞ Ğ APKH SĞH PİGŞHİ SŞ P MHŞLSİŞHAPSŞ MSKH İŞLHİPTOHKS LMŞLHMSTOHKŞ MSTA TOH PATK HŞLSMH, KSTĞP ALMPLĞAT A, TK, KTKHLATĞHKTKHĞPSLTÜĞL ĞPĞAOJT HPTSOKHPOTHPTOHI POKTPOYP AOSTPHJSKTHPST PIPTKPSOJT, ÜARTGPOTPOJPROYJPAÜROTPİHJAPDOJPAERJKFPPA JPRJP TJPHRGAPO, ĞK KAĞRJARJTPIRJOA RIJP oorıj ıjapj poporja POJ GPIJSPTJ Pjt ptj pajpt japP PHPOTJHAP YPOpoj pj5yjs t pjP p jt p, TJYIAI PAPo psoypyırıjorıtjoıtjroı yoıjroıjreoıytroıyhj

IELTS essay What a pencil deal with us in our lives?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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