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how far do you believe in anthropocentric technology?

how far do you believe in anthropocentric technology? jo6OM
The emergence of man centered technology is associated with modernism and consumerism therefore the modern society has used technology to fulfil the unlimited desire ignoring the nature and ecology. Such perspective of humans imbalances the ecology which causes natural disaster and disrupts the ecology. Kathmandu valley has experienced this type of technological effect concerning global warming, climate change and ambient air pollution. In this context, the man centered technology has ruined the ecological chain and biological death of rivers in Kathmandu valley
The emergence of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
centered technology
is associated
with modernism and consumerism
therefore
the modern society has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
technology to fulfil the unlimited desire ignoring the nature and ecology. Such perspective of humans imbalances the ecology which causes natural disaster and disrupts the ecology. Kathmandu valley has experienced this type of technological effect concerning global warming, climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and ambient air pollution. In this context, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
centered technology has ruined the ecological chain and biological death of rivers in Kathmandu
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valley
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IELTS essay how far do you believe in anthropocentric technology?

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