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we prevent nature from losing.

we prevent nature from losing. a7B57
In recent years in almost every country families produces a large amount of waste. Im my opinion a large quantity of waste is packantages from we buy things. I believe every person can prevent environment from polluting. So government should forbid waste treatment and accept the strick law for environment care. Moreover, you should ride bicycle and transport instead of vehicle. Because, environment and air is clear up and less pollute by this way. In addition to you should switch off computers, lamps and everything we do not use. This could be caused of wasting energy. It is argued that people do not cut down a lot of tress for their homes and produce paper. If you cut down a large quantity of wood, it will be caused of reducing extinct tress. In conclusion, I strongly believe every person is able to save care of environment. So that we prevent nature from losing.
In recent years in almost every country families produces a large amount of waste.
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Im
my opinion a large quantity of waste is
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packantages
from we
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buy
things.

I believe every person can
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prevent
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environment
from polluting.
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So
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government
should forbid waste treatment and accept the
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strick
law for
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environment
care.

Moreover
, you should ride bicycle and transport
instead
of vehicle.
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Because
,
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environment
and air is
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clear
up and less pollute by this way.

In addition
to you should switch off computers, lamps and everything we do not
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use
. This could
be caused
of wasting energy.

It
is argued
that
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people
do not
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cut
down
Possible agreement error. The noun tress seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of tresses".
a lot of tress
for their homes and produce paper. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down a large quantity of wood, it will
be caused
of reducing extinct tress.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe every person is able to save care of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
we
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prevent
nature from losing.

IELTS essay we prevent nature from losing.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
153 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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