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We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of Earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists?

We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of Earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? 2lbVk
There is no doubt that knowledge about other galaxies is a matter of concern. Some recurrent questions are related to the possibility of finding life outside the Earth and the consequences of these results. In this essay, I will discuss this topic and explain why I believe that aliens are real. To begin with, those who argue that alien life exists claim this because of the visualization of unidentified flying objects or UFO. Even though for many years these sky appearances were explained by satellites of meteors, nowadays scientifics denied it. Bright objects in the nights had been seen multiple times and are now recognized as out of this universe objects. There was a well-known ocassion in Arizona, were many people lived this experience in a Valley and could confirm the hypothesis. Overall, these mind-blowing adventures may be the reasons to explain life outside this planet. Turning to the possible consequences of this discovery, these findings could bring fear and curiosity to individuals. This is because, it is a common human response to be afraid of the unknown, while at the same time, people will be curious about alien’s behavior. Governments would have the duty to discover if these creatures are dangerous for populations and at the same time, investigate their ways of living. This will implicate knowledge related to their foods and languages for example. So, confirming the life of new species in other galaxies will represent a plethora of questions for society. To conclude, this essay discussed about the probability of finding life outside the Earth and its possible implications. In my honest opinion, I believe that aliens exists, however if this could be confirm by scientific societies, it would bring too much chaos to the world.
There is no doubt that knowledge about other galaxies is a matter of concern.
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Some
recurrent questions
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life
outside the Earth and the consequences of these results. In this essay, I will discuss this topic and
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explain
why I believe that
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aliens
are real.

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begin
with, those who argue that
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alien
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life
exists claim this
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because
of the visualization of unidentified flying objects or UFO.
Even though
for
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years these sky appearances were
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explained
by satellites of meteors, nowadays
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scientifics
denied it. Bright objects in the nights had been
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seen
multiple times and are
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now
recognized as out of this universe objects. There was a well-known
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in Arizona, were
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people
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lived
this experience in a Valley and could confirm the hypothesis.
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, these mind-blowing adventures may be the reasons to
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explain
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life
outside this planet.

Turning to the possible consequences of this discovery, these findings could bring fear and curiosity to individuals. This is
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because
, it is a common human response to be afraid of the unknown, while at the same time,
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people
will be curious about
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alien’s
behavior.
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Governments
would have the duty to discover if these creatures are
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dangerous
for populations and at the same time, investigate their ways of living. This will implicate knowledge related to their foods and languages
for example
.
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So
, confirming the
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life
of new species in other galaxies will represent a plethora of questions for society.

To conclude
, this essay
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discussed about the
probability of finding
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life
outside the Earth and its possible implications. In my honest opinion, I believe that
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aliens
exists,
however
if this could be
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confirm
by scientific societies, it would bring too much chaos to the world.

IELTS essay We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of Earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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