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to describe your family in exercise 2

to describe your family in exercise 2 302RX
Today, I will introduction my family. My name's Ngoc. My family has 4 people: my parents, my old brother and his wife. And me. I've got one old brother. His name's Hung. He is worker in private company. His wife name is Xuan. She is 28 years old. Her job is the same as her husband. My parents name is Dam and Bich. My father is 59 years old and my mother is 7 years younger than my father. So this is my family.
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Today
, I
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will introduction
my family. My name's
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Ngoc
. My family has 4
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people
: my parents, my
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old
brother and his wife. And me. I've
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got
one
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old
brother. His name's Hung. He is worker in private
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company
. His wife name is
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Xuan
. She is 28 years
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old
. Her job is the same as her husband. My parents name is Dam and
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Bich
. My father is 59 years
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old
and my mother is 7 years younger than my father.
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So
this is my family.

IELTS essay to describe your family in exercise 2

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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