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to describe your family in exercise 2

to describe your family in exercise 2 302RX

Today, I will introduction my family. My name's Ngoc. My family has 4 people: my parents, my old brother and his wife. And me. I've got one old brother. His name's Hung. He is worker in private company. His wife name is Xuan. She is 28 years old. Her job is the same as her husband. My parents name is Dam and Bich. My father is 59 years old and my mother is 7 years younger than my father. So this is my family.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, I The word 'introduction' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
will introduction
 my family. My name's Possible spelling mistake found.NGCNGONGOsNOC
Ngoc
. My family has 4 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
: my parents, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 brother and his wife. And me. I've This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 brother. His name's Hung. He is worker in private This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. His wife name is Possible spelling mistake found.JuanYuanXian
Xuan
. She is 28 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
. Her job is the same as her husband. My parents name is Dam and Possible spelling mistake found.RichBachBirchMichBCHBIH
Bich
. My father is 59 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 and my mother is 7 years younger than my father. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 this is my family. 