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Should people who suffer from incurable diseases be allowed to euthanise (Commit suicide)

Should people who suffer from incurable diseases be allowed to euthanise (Commit suicide) d3BEP
Patients who suffer from the terminally ill are allowed to end their lives sooner. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives to make it more objective. I totally disagree with this statement and I believe that keeping patients alive is a humane choice. On the one hand, euthanization should not be legal. Firstly, I will state that each person is crucial for their family. Besides, their families still have the right to keep the patients alive. For instance, family members will be the ones who want to save moments for the rest of patients' lives the most. Secondly, long-suffering people still have the ability to fulfill their wishes before they leave. Additionally, if they explore the world, they might feel resilience and be people without toxic positivity. As proof, exchanging the outside will help their brain mentally stability, which may lead to prolonging a patient's life for a longer span. On the other hand, permitting the death of hopelessly sick or injured individuals sometimes might be the sole humane option. First, this one helps the patients feel no more physical pain. Moreover, the more they feel pain the more they hate themselves, this starts psychology's effect which will be psychosis. Suppose that instead of standing there and looking at people die slowly and hurtfully, let them sleep softly once. Second, the patients will no longer be the families' burdens. Be that as family members can use that amount of money to pay for something else that is necessary instead. To illustrate, low-income families are not able to pay hospital fees. Patients who are terminally ill are given the option to end their lives sooner. Concerning the opposition, I will remark that each individual is important to their family and that they still have the option to achieve their objectives. On the other hand, this one allows sufferers to be free of agony and no longer be a difficulty for their families. I completely disagree, and I believe that holding patients alive is the most compassionate option.
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terminally
ill are
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allowed
to
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end
their
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lives
sooner. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives to
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make
it more objective. I
totally
disagree with this statement and I believe that keeping
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patients
alive is a humane choice.

On the one hand,
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euthanization
should not be legal.
Firstly
, I will state that each person is crucial for their
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family
.
Besides
, their
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families
still
have the right to
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keep
the
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patients
alive.
For instance
,
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family
members will be the ones who want to save moments for the rest of patients'
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lives
the most.
Secondly
, long-suffering
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people
still
have the ability to fulfill their wishes
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before
they
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leave
.
Additionally
, if they explore the world, they might feel resilience and be
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people
without toxic positivity. As proof, exchanging the outside will
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help
their brain mentally stability, which may lead to prolonging a patient's life for a longer span.

On the other hand
, permitting the death of
hopelessly
sick or injured individuals
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sometimes
might be the sole humane
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option
.
First
, this one
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helps
the
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patients
feel no more physical pain.
Moreover
, the more they feel pain the more they hate themselves, this
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starts
psychology's effect which will be psychosis. Suppose that
instead
of standing there and looking at
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people
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die
slowly
and
hurtfully
,
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let
them sleep
softly
once. Second, the
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patients
will no longer be the families' burdens. Be that as
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family
members can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
that amount of money to pay for something else
that is
necessary
instead
. To illustrate, low-income
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families
are not able to pay hospital fees.

Patients who are
terminally
ill are
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given
the
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option
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
sooner. Concerning the opposition, I will remark that each individual is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to their
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family
and that they
still
have the
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option
to achieve their objectives.
On the other hand
, this one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
sufferers to be free of agony and no longer be a difficulty for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
. I completely disagree, and I believe that holding
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patients
alive is the most compassionate
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option
.
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IELTS essay Should people who suffer from incurable diseases be allowed to euthanise (Commit suicide)

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  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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