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wave energy machines and their working

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The working of the wave- energy machine can be a little complex. The air flow comes from above into the turbine which moves the air towards outside. during this process the water levels increase in the chambers. Now, the location also plays an important role. If installed in the sea, larger waves will produce higher output. But this would have a higher installation cost as compared to the small waves, where the output will be lower. This is how wave energy machines work.
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role. If installed in the sea, larger
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will produce higher output.
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IELTS essay wave energy machines and their working

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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