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Write about the following topic: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE. BrrX
Some human activities such as waste disposal have caused a plethora of issues in the community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide a waste bin for every household. This essay disagrees with the assertion on the following premise. One of the major ways to tackle environmental issues such as waste disposal is adequate sensitization of the populace. The need to enlighten people of the danger that comes with littering the environment is constantly heightening. The effect of waste disposal is primarily pollution which leads to the emission of greenhouse gases. Recent research carried out by the Environmental Management Board in Uganda on waste control illustrates a high level of emission of gases caused by incessant disposal of waste products. This demonstrates that the provision of a waste bin would not control the root cause of waste disposal rather adequate sensitization would alleviate the wrong mindset fostering waste production. Furthermore, constant environmental sanitation policies should be introduced by the government to mitigate waste production. Moreover, Sanctions on defaulting environmental policies should be enforced to maintain a healthier environment. Statistics reveal a myriad of diseases sprang up between 2007-2020 due to a lackadaisical approach towards environmental sanitation. More so, it demonstrates that about 80% of air-borne diseases are caused by unclean surroundings. It would be more beneficial to place rules and guidelines to curb waste creation, this would not cost the government an arm and a leg as compared to the provision of waste bins. Conclusively, it would be near perfect for the government to sensitize people on the need to minimize waste production and disposal. Also, provide a policy that would foster constant environmental sanitation as well as implement some actions that would sanction defaulters. This would help to reduce pollution that may result in the emission of greenhouse gases that may further cause global warming.
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human activities such as
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waste
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disposal
have caused a plethora of issues in the community.
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Some
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people
say that the solution is for the
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government
to provide a
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waste
bin for every household. This essay disagrees with the assertion on the following premise.

One of the major ways to tackle
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environmental
issues such as
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waste
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disposal
is adequate sensitization of the populace. The need to enlighten
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people
of the
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danger
that
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comes
with littering the environment is
constantly
heightening. The effect of
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waste
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disposal
is
primarily
pollution which leads to the emission of greenhouse gases. Recent research carried out by the
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Environmental
Management Board in Uganda on
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waste
control illustrates a high level of emission of gases caused by incessant
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disposal
of
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waste
products. This demonstrates that the provision of a
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waste
bin would not control the root cause of
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waste
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disposal
rather
adequate sensitization would alleviate the
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wrong
mindset fostering
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waste
production.

Furthermore
, constant
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environmental
sanitation policies should
be introduced
by the
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government
to mitigate
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waste
production.
Moreover
, Sanctions on defaulting
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environmental
policies should
be enforced
to maintain a healthier environment. Statistics reveal a myriad of diseases sprang up between 2007-2020 due to a lackadaisical approach towards
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environmental
sanitation. More
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so
, it demonstrates that about 80% of air-borne diseases
are caused
by unclean surroundings. It would be more beneficial to place
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rules
and guidelines to curb
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waste
creation, this would not cost the
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government
an arm and a leg as compared to the provision of
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waste
bins.

Conclusively
, it would be near perfect for the
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government
to sensitize
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people
on the need to minimize
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waste
production and
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disposal
.
Also
, provide a policy that would foster constant
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environmental
sanitation
as well
as implement
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some
actions that would sanction defaulters. This would
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help
to
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reduce
pollution that may result in the emission of greenhouse gases that may
further
cause global warming.
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IELTS essay : Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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