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visit different places around the country

Thanks for the opportunity to talk about a time when I get lost in a place I didn’t know. Well, I am a travel freak person and I like to visit different places around the country as well as the world. I always visit different places. When I was a student of 9th grade, I went to a summer camp and got lost from my team. It was at the beginning of summer when our school authority decided to take us to a summer camp in a remote place. We were thrilled to about that we are going to learn some extraordinary skills to survive. When we were taken to the place, we found a place is a different form of natural beauty and the camping sites were perfect for us. Following the teachers’ instruction, we pitched our camps and some of us started collecting woods for fueling the food preparation for the first night under the open sky. I also went to collect woods (although there were fewer trees), I was lost.

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get
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place
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different
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places
 around the country as well
 as the world. I always visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places.

When I was a student of 9th grade, I went to a summer camp and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 lost from my team.

It was at the beginning of summer when our school authority decided to take us to a summer camp in a remote You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. We were thrilled
 to about that we are going to learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extraordinary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 to survive. When we were taken
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
, we found a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 form of natural beauty and the camping sites were perfect for us. Following the teachers’ instruction, we pitched our camps and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of us This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 collecting woods for fueling the food preparation for the first
 night under the open sky. I also
 went to collect woods (although there were fewer trees), I was lost
. 