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“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.Write between 200 and 300 words.

“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat. ”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. Write between 200 and 300 words. g5q7l
Vegetarianism has become increasingly popular since the 1970s and the ‘animal liberation’ movement. It has also been a part of many cultures around the world, most notably in India. Many people choose to become vegetarians because of ethical reasons. This essay will discuss why being vegetarian is in fact much more ethical than eating meat. It is well known that meat eating causes enormous suffering to animals. Chickens, cows and pigs, for instance, are raised only to be slaughtered for human consumption. While the level of consciousness of these animals is debatable, there is no doubt that the suffering that they feel is very real. In short, the ethics behind killing animals for human food can never be reconciled. Vegetarianism also has a positive impact on the environment, which also makes it an ethical stance. Preserving the environment by not eating meat means that everyone will live better lives. Farming cows, for instance, has been shown to negatively affect both pastures and the atmosphere. If we preserve the environment by not eating meat then future generations will live in a much cleaner world, which is highly ethical for us to do. This essay discussed why vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat because it eliminates unnecessary harm to animals and sustains the environment. In my opinion, vegetarianism is superior to meat eating in terms of ethics.
Vegetarianism has become
increasingly
popular since the 1970s and the
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‘animal
liberation’ movement. It has
also
been a part of
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many
cultures around the world, most
notably
in India.
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people
choose to become vegetarians
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because
of
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ethical
reasons. This essay will discuss why being vegetarian is in fact much more
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ethical
than
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eating
meat.

It is well known that
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meat
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eating
causes enormous suffering to
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animals
. Chickens, cows and pigs,
for instance
,
are raised
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only
to
be slaughtered
for human consumption. While the level of consciousness of these
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animals
is debatable, there is no doubt that the suffering that they feel is
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very
real. In short, the ethics behind killing
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animals
for human food can never
be reconciled
.

Vegetarianism
also
has a
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positive
impact on the
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environment
, which
also
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makes
it an
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ethical
stance. Preserving the
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environment
by not
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eating
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meat
means that everyone will
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live
better
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lives
. Farming cows,
for instance
, has
been shown
to
negatively
affect both pastures and the atmosphere. If we preserve the
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environment
by not
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eating
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meat
then future generations will
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live
in a much cleaner world, which is
highly
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ethical
for us to do.

This essay discussed why vegetarianism is more
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ethical
than
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eating
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meat
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because
it eliminates unnecessary harm to
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animals
and sustains the
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environment
. In my opinion, vegetarianism is superior to
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meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
in terms of ethics.
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IELTS essay “Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat. ”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. Write between 200 and 300 words.

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226 words
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