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People of different cultures change their way of looking by changing hair color, cosmetics, jewellery. surgery why do you think people do this. is it good to do

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Due to modernization, people from all over the world, are diverting their lifestyle from simplicity towards luxury and western appearance. This is due to the fact that they try to adopt modern lifestyle, gain popularity and beatify their look. In this essay, I will contend these reasons in more detail and elaborate its positive and negative consequences. Firstly, change in look has become a symbol of rich and luxurious lifestyle. For example, in every country and culture, women, who are wearing expensive jewellery and clothes, often recognized as rich personalities of the society as compar. . .
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from all over the world, are diverting their lifestyle from simplicity towards luxury and western appearance.
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positive
and
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in look has become a symbol of rich and luxurious lifestyle.
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, in every country and culture, women, who are wearing expensive
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jewellery
and clothes,
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recognized as rich personalities of the society as
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IELTS essay People of different cultures change their way of looking by changing hair color, cosmetics, jewellery. surgery why do you think people do this. is it good to do

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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