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ns and bounded to the south by the ocean. Overall, the area witnessed dramatic changes with the addition of hotels and the upgrade of infrastructure during a 30-year period. It can also be seen from the plans that the population of this area went up enormously from 12, 000 to possibly 130, 000 during the holiday. The first noticeable change is that the woodland was converted into a golf course for tourist purposes. In addition, there were a lot of high-rise hotels and beaches which were built along the coastline on both sides of the rural area. A new tourist shop was introduced in the village for visitors. Moreover, the harbour where the boats could dock was demolished. Further development is that the location where the farmers feed sheep and goats disappeared for expanding the village. Not only the village in the north-west of the town but also all of the other ones were extended. Additionally, a large road was built to cope with the increased traffic and provide easy access to other villages. The government cut down olive trees and modernised them into farmland for the provision of fruits and vegetables.

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 and bounded to the south by the ocean. Overall
, the area witnessed dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 with the addition of hotels and the upgrade of infrastructure during a 30-year period. It can also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the plans that the population of this area went up enormously
 from 12, 000 to possibly
 130, 000 during the holiday.

The first
 noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that the woodland was converted
 into a golf course for tourist purposes. In addition
, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 high-rise hotels and beaches which were built
 along the coastline on both sides of the rural area. A new tourist shop was introduced
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 for visitors. Moreover
, the Possible spelling mistake. 'harbour' is British English.harbor
harbour
 where the boats could dock was demolished
.

Further
 development is that the location where the farmers feed sheep and goats disappeared for expanding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 in the north-west of the town This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 other ones were extended
. Additionally
, a large road was built
 to cope with the increased traffic and provide easy access to other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
villages
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down olive trees and Possible spelling mistake. 'modernised' is British English.modernized
modernised
 them into farmland for the provision of fruits and vegetables. 