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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms people are less fit nowadays than ever before

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms people are less fit nowadays than ever before 9B17w
It is true that individuals are less fit in these days as compared to past with the loss of sport facilities, masses face much difficulty. Instead of this, individuals living a happy life, and physically strong with the help of sports for instance, last year a survey show that many masses that have a many problems like depression And also have many physical problen due to lack of sports therefore they not only physically unfit and also mentally too. inspite of this, they forget many qualities.
It is true that individuals are less fit in these days as compared to past with the loss of sport facilities, masses face much difficulty.
Instead
of this, individuals living a happy life, and
physically
strong with the
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help
of sports
for instance
, last year a survey
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show
that
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many
masses that have a
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many
problems like depression And
also
have
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many
physical
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problen
due to lack of sports
therefore
they not
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only
physically
unfit and
also
mentally too.
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inspite
of this, they forget
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qualities.
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IELTS essay Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms people are less fit nowadays than ever before

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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