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Using the research described by the professor, explain what scientists have learned about the mathematical abilities of babies. v.1

Using the research described by the professor, explain what scientists have learned about the mathematical abilities of babies. v. 1
The world today is more connected than ever. With the ease of access of intercontinental travel and international cooperation, many students are choosing to study abroad. Even though they bring many benefits for themselves and for the countries involved, there are also some significant drawbacks for the local populations. This essay will examine the positive, and negative effects international students have in their host countries and for themselves. International students bring many benefits for all those involved. Individuals from different backgrounds tend to bring new ideas and points of views. For example, students who aren't familiar with western ideas of enlightenment and personal liberty provide students with a different point of view of the world they live in. The host countries might also benefit from the different values they bring. Students and the host countries both benefit from an interchange of ideas. However, while international students may have several positive aspects, they may cause some unintended consequences for the countries involved. An increase amount of international students means that there might be less opportunities for domestic students. If the majority of international students return to their home country after receiving a diploma, the host country will then have fewer highly educated individuals, which might affect the country in the long run. In conclusion, even though international students may spread create an interchange of ideas in the host countries, they also cause some significant drawback for domestic students who wish to continue their higher education. Overall, the benefits of international students do not outweigh their drawbacks.
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of access of intercontinental travel and
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international
cooperation,
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many
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students
are choosing to study abroad.
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bring
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many
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benefits
for themselves and for the
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countries
involved, there are
also
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some
significant drawbacks for the local populations. This essay will examine the
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positive
, and
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negative
effects
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international
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students
have in their
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host
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countries
and for themselves.

International
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students
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bring
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many
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benefits
for all those involved. Individuals from
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different
backgrounds tend to
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bring
new
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ideas
and points of views.
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students
who aren't familiar with western
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ideas
of enlightenment and personal liberty provide
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students
with a
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different
point of view of the world they
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in. The
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host
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.
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both
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ideas
.

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students
may have several
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positive
aspects, they may cause
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some
unintended consequences for the
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countries
involved. An increase amount of
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international
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students
means that there might be
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less
opportunities for domestic
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students
. If the majority of
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international
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students
return to their home
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country
after receiving a diploma, the
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host
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country
will then have fewer
highly
educated individuals, which might affect the
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country
in the long run.

In conclusion
,
even though
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international
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students
may spread create an interchange of
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ideas
in the
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, they
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significant drawback for domestic
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students
who wish to continue their higher education.
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, the
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benefits
of
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international
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students
do not outweigh their drawbacks.
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IELTS essay Using the research described by the professor, explain what scientists have learned about the mathematical abilities of babies. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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