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using animals in medical research . agree or disagree

Using animals in medical research is very popular. That is why some people think that it is acceptable. I think it is not all time and you will need a special license to do it. Animal protection society would not give a chance without it. However, Some people think oppositely and they think it is a serious crime. First of all, I am agree with people who think animals are a suitable option to check various medical researches, pills, and medical experiments for the benefit of humanity if They have a license to do it. People are used to doing these experiments without any license for a long time. But nowadays it is not a possible and serious crime. Furthermore, most animals especially mammals body structure is similar to us and they will react for pills like us.
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IELTS essay using animals in medical research. agree or disagree

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138 words
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