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Usee GDP bbsr so pick bro ish us au odia Isro uttar pachi bgsyi kathi app ak all zl. 9.

Usee GDP bbsr so pick bro ish us au odia Isro uttar pachi bgsyi kathi app ak all zl. 9. 0Aek5
In this contemporary era, plethora of people use electronic gadgets such as mobile phones and computers and this trend is increasing day by day and least people writing letter. Some reckon that traditional ways of writing skills maybe destroy in future. My position is agreed to large extent and reasons are in trail paragraphs. To begin with, due to advancement advancement of technology people influence and adapt and adapt it, there are several reasons behind vanishing traditional skills. Firstly, youngsters nowadays are lazy and this electronic device make their work ease. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by the Times Of India where they concluded that, there had been 37% of rise in in usage of mobile phones and computers in 2018 by Indians. As a result, there are less chances of having traditional skills alive in near future future. Moreover, these letter writing skills has been replaced with technology over a period of time span because technology is the fastest way to send or receive mail and messages, it connect people with their near and dear ones through messages and video calls. On stark contrary, there are some reasons why writing skills cannot be replaced be replaced with technology. Additionally, letter writing is mandatory in some sector like job interview. Since, person show their dignity in a formal way to get to get to get job placement. Moreover, letter writing show ability and writing skills to other which is essential for everybody to to have accuracy of their writing skills which cannot be seen through using technology because of using mobile phones and computers. There are facility which is being easy for other to translate through their voice without typing a messages. in conclusion it is inferred that, having mobile phones and computers make people life easy to write message and it is fastest way compare to writing message; However, I believe writing skill is most important for job and to measure accuracy of their skills with regard to their writing skills.
In this contemporary era, plethora of
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people
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use
electronic gadgets such as mobile
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phones
and computers and this trend is increasing day by day and least
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people
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writing
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letter
.
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Some
reckon that traditional ways of
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writing
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skills
maybe
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destroy
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in future
. My position is
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agreed
to large extent and reasons are in trail paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, due to
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advancement advancement
of
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technology
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people
influence and adapt and adapt it, there are several reasons behind vanishing traditional
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skills
.
Firstly
, youngsters nowadays are lazy and this electronic device
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make
their work
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ease
. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by
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the Times Of India
where they concluded that, there had been 37% of rise
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in in
usage of mobile
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phones
and computers in 2018 by Indians.
As a result
, there are
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less
chances of having traditional
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skills
alive in near
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future future
.
Moreover
, these
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letter
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writing
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skills
has
been replaced
with
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technology
over a period of time span
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because
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technology
is the fastest way to
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send
or receive mail and
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messages
, it
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connect
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people
with their near and dear ones through
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messages
and video calls.

On stark contrary, there are
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some
reasons why
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writing
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skills
cannot
be replaced
be replaced
with
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technology
.
Additionally
,
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letter
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writing
is mandatory in
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some
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sector
like job interview.
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Since
, person
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show
their dignity
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in a formal way
to
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get
to
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get
to
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get
job placement.
Moreover
,
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letter
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writing
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show
ability and
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writing
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skills
to other which is essential for everybody
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to to
have accuracy of their
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writing
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skills
which cannot be
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seen
through using
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technology
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because
of using mobile
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phones
and computers. There are facility which is being easy for other to translate through their voice without typing
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a messages
.

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in
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conclusion it
is inferred
that, having mobile
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phones
and computers
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make
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people
life easy to write
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message
and it is
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fastest
way compare to
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writing
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message
;
However
, I believe
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writing
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skill
is most
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important
for job and to measure accuracy of their
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skills
with regard to their
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writing
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skills
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IELTS essay Usee GDP bbsr so pick bro ish us au odia Isro uttar pachi bgsyi kathi app ak all zl. 9.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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