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used to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t seen in a long time, the question might change into the present perfect – “What have you been up to?” Now they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last time you talked. You’ll probably answer a little differently

used to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t seen in a long time, the question might change into the present perfect – “What have you been up to? ” Now they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last time you talked. You’ll probably answer a little differently 0E0eB
used to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t seen in a long time, the question might change into the present perfect – “What have you been up to? ” Now they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last time you talked. You’ll probably answer a little differently. used to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t seen in a long time, the question might change into the present perfect – “What have you been up to? ” Now they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last time you talking. You’ll probably answer a little differently
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“What have you been up to? ”
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used
to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in a long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, the question might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
into the present perfect
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
“What have you been up to? ”
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
Did you mean "you're talking", "you are talking", or "you were talking"?
you talking
. You’ll
probably
answer a
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IELTS essay used to know, maybe a friend or a family member you haven’t seen in a long time, the question might change into the present perfect – “What have you been up to? ” Now they are asking about things that have happened in your life since the last time you talked. You’ll probably answer a little differently

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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