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7. When a massive star in the large magellanic cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos were detected on earth. 8. Some of the agricultural practices use today are responsible for fostering desertification. 9. Every open space in targeted area that has grass and few bushes are occupied by the white-crowned sparrow. 10. Krakatoa is remembered as volcano that put so much ash into the air that sunset around the world was affected for two yeqrs afterward.

7. When a massive star in the large magellanic cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos were detected on earth. 8. Some of the agricultural practices use today are responsible for fostering desertification. 9. Every open space in targeted area that has grass and few bushes are occupied by the white-crowned sparrow. 10. Krakatoa is remembered as volcano that put so much ash into the air that sunset around the world was affected for two yeqrs afterward. bY30X
7. When a massive star in the large magellanic cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos were detected on earth. 8. Some of the agricultural practices use today are responsible for fostering desertification. 9. Every open space in targeted area that has grass and few bushes are occupied by the white-crowned sparrow. 10. Krakatoa is remembered as volcano that put so much ash into the air that sunset around the world was affected for two yeqrs afterward.
7. When a massive star in the large
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magellanic
cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos
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were
detected on earth.

8.
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Some of the
agricultural practices
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use
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today
are responsible for fostering desertification.

9. Every open space in targeted area that has grass and few bushes
are occupied
by the white-crowned sparrow.

10. Krakatoa
is remembered
as volcano that put
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so
much ash into the air that sunset around the world was
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affected
for two
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yeqrs
afterward.
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IELTS essay 7. When a massive star in the large magellanic cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos were detected on earth. 8. Some of the agricultural practices use today are responsible for fostering desertification. 9. Every open space in targeted area that has grass and few bushes are occupied by the white-crowned sparrow. 10. Krakatoa is remembered as volcano that put so much ash into the air that sunset around the world was affected for two yeqrs afterward.

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