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Think about a typical day. How many different sounds do you hear from the moment you wake up until you go to sleep?

Think about a typical day. How many different sounds do you hear from the moment you wake up until you go to sleep? VBPeJ

Ever since i woke up, a sound that comes to my ears first is sound of the alarm coming from my phone. It annoyed me a lot but at least it wakes me up. Next is the sound of water coming from the water tap, the rustling sound of a toothbrush, sound of

Ever since Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 woke up,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
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sound
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to my ears first
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
 of the alarm coming from my phone. It annoyed me a lot This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at least it wakes me up. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Next
 is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
 of water coming from the water tap, the rustling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
 of a toothbrush,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
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IELTS essay Think about a typical day. How many different sounds do you hear from the moment you wake up until you go to sleep?

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