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Some people think completing the university education is the best way to get the job

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IELTS essay Some people think completing the university education is the best way to get the job

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
55 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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