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1. Nobody know when the process of glass-making was invented. 2. Sugar like glucose is made up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms. 3. Part of electricity used in United States today come from hydroelectric sources. 4. The language of the world present a fast array of structural similarities and differences. 5. The rise of multinationals have resulted in a great deal of deal ambiguliy because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions.

1. Nobody know when the process of glass-making was invented. 2. Sugar like glucose is made up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms. 3. Part of electricity used in United States today come from hydroelectric sources. 4. The language of the world present a fast array of structural similarities and differences. 5. The rise of multinationals have resulted in a great deal of deal ambiguliy because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions. MM3e9
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1. Nobody
The pronoun 'Nobody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "knows", "knew".
know
when the process of glass-making
was invented
.

2. Sugar like glucose
is made
up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms.

3. Part of electricity
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used
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United States".
in United States
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today
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from hydroelectric sources.

4. The language of the world present a
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fast
array of structural similarities and differences.

5. The rise of multinationals
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have
resulted in a great deal of deal
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ambiguliy
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because
multinationals can operate in
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so
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many
jurisdictions.

IELTS essay 1. Nobody know when the process of glass-making was invented. 2. Sugar like glucose is made up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms. 3. Part of electricity used in United States today come from hydroelectric sources. 4. The language of the world present a fast array of structural similarities and differences. 5. The rise of multinationals have resulted in a great deal of deal ambiguliy because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions.

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