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University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays in modern society everyone give same respect and same opportunities to boys and girls. university accepting equal number of male and female in every stream which sounds like reservation is not necessary but college should give admission base on skills, merit, and choose is good for students. Having a same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. number of students in class is depends on the policy of institude. if a university decide to fill any branch with same number of males and womens, it would need enough application of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other. Foe example, mechanical engineering tends to attract more boys application and it would be difficult to fill these course of half of it is allocated to girls. I believe that it would be unfair to give admission in university on the basis of gender. University should have to select candidates for each stream according to their qualifications. In this way both have a same opportunities, and applicants know that they will achieve admission in good institute if they eork hard to achieve good grade at school. If a female student is the best candidate for the place on a course, it would be wrong to give her place to any male candidate. In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
Nowadays in modern society everyone
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give
same respect and same opportunities to boys and girls.
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university
accepting equal
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number
of male and female in every stream which sounds like reservation is not
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necessary
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but
college should
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give
admission base on
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skills
, merit, and choose is
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good
for students.

Having a same
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number
of
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men
and women on all degree
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courses
is
simply
unrealistic.
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number
of students in
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class
is depends on the policy of
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institude
.
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if
a
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university
decide to fill any branch with same
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number
of males and
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womens
, it would need
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enough
application of each gender. In reality,
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many
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courses
are more popular with one gender than the other. Foe example, mechanical engineering tends to attract more boys
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application and
it would be difficult to fill these
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course
of half of it
is allocated
to girls.

I believe that it would be unfair to
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give
admission in
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university
on the basis of gender.
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University
should
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have to
select candidates for each stream according to their qualifications. In this way both have
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a same opportunities
, and applicants know that they will achieve admission in
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good
institute if they
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eork
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hard
to achieve
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good
grade at school. If a female student is the best candidate for the place on a
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course
, it would be
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wrong
to
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give
her place to any male candidate.

In conclusion
, the selection of
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university
students should
be based
on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to
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change
to a selection procedure based on gender.
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IELTS essay University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject.

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