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University education should be free for all students.To what extend do you agree or disagree.

University education should be free for all students. 2mdb
Many individual advocate that tertiary education must be free of cost for every pupils. I strongly agree with the statement and believe that pupils are more focused on learning if education is free. To embark on, there are significant advantages of free eduction in universities. Student can focus on their study well, as a result, skilled manpower like doctors, engineers, businessman are produced and this will have great benefits to the society as well as country as youth are the active manpower who have great role in the nation’s development. Finland is the prime example, where education is free of cost owing to the fact that skilled youth are produced. Moreover, rather than searching job student can engage in volunteer work, and they can develop their communication skills, leadership skills, and business skills, which in turn will have great help in their career. On the other hand, many countries has the provision of student loan where the pupils can borrow the loan from bank and pay their college and universities fees, but their half of the life will be wasted repaying the loan and they cannot focus on their study and career rather they get frustrated that leads to death of student. For example, in America many young learners suicide due to the fact that they are unable to pay the bank loan. So to stop youth from being victim of the death it is necessary to make education free of cost. In addition, a lot of student who are from destitute family are unable to pay fee of their college and university since their parents cannot afford to pay their childrens fee, as a result, several youth are deprived of education, but free education would reduce the burden of the parents for paying university and will make education accessible to everyone. In conclusion, authorities ought to promulgate the policies regarding free university education to all the citizen and make sure no one will be deprived of education
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with the statement and believe that pupils are more focused on learning if
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is free.

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free
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eduction
in
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universities
.
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Student
can focus on their study well,
as a result
, skilled manpower like doctors, engineers, businessman
are produced
and this will have great benefits to the society
as well
as country as
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youth
are the active manpower who have great role in the nation’s development. Finland is the prime example, where
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education
is
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free
of cost owing to the fact that skilled
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youth
are produced
.
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,
rather
than searching job
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student
can engage in volunteer work, and they can develop their communication
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skills
, leadership
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skills
, and business
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skills
, which in turn will have great
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help
in their career.

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,
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countries has the provision of
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loan
where the pupils can borrow the
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loan
from bank and
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pay
their college and
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universities
fees,
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their half of the life will
be wasted
repaying the
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loan and
they cannot focus on their study and career
rather
they
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frustrated that leads to death of
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student
.
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, in America
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many
young learners suicide due to the fact that they are unable to
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pay
the bank
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loan
.
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to
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stop
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youth
from being victim of the death it is necessary to
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make
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education
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free
of cost.
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,
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a lot of
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student
who are from destitute family are unable to
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fee of their college and
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university
since their parents cannot afford to
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pay
their
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fee,
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, several
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are deprived
of
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,
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free
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education
would
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reduce
the burden of the parents for paying
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university
and will
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make
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education
accessible to everyone.

In conclusion
, authorities ought to promulgate the policies regarding
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free
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university
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education
to all the citizen and
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make
sure no one will
be deprived
of
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education

IELTS essay University education should be free for all students.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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