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UNIVERSITY EDUCATION AND OTHER

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It is indubitable that university education is vital. Some people are of the opinion that those who are not study in colleges can become success, I, however, disagree with the notion, I believe that school education is essential for success. In this essay, I shall highlight the argument surround by my opinion. Indeed, the first and foremost reason why I believe that university education is necessary that tutors are available for monitoring the students. Deeply, if someone is there to take care the students then they can perform better because teachers help them to overcome their difficulties. There is an illustration that the government is promoting school education in all nations. Moreover, another major reason why I agree with this is people get job easily because most of the companies looking for graduates. For an instance, multi-national companies such as Wipro and TCS looking for IT professionals those who are pass out from a reputed colleges with flying colours. However, the opponent of the above-mentioned view claim that education is not necessary for the success. To begin with, some people believe that practical knowledge is necessary for success than theoretical knowledge. Clearly, there is a saying that practice make a man perfect which means those who work more will help them to understand more deeply about a particular job. They believe that, the world richest man Bill Gates is a college dropper, but his real-life experience helps him to become the wealthiest man in the world. They also argue that those who have innate talents can success in their life. In other words, proficiency such as singing, drawing is inborn which cannot do anything with education. Summing up, although a minus group of people contents that citizen can become success without education, I, myself once again restate my opinion that people can success only with studying in college for, they can able to acquire a plum job because most of the MNCs looking for graduates.
It is indubitable that university
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education
is vital.
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Some
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people
are of the opinion that those
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who
are not study in colleges can become
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success
, I,
however
, disagree with the notion, I
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believe
that school
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education
is essential for
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success
. In this essay, I shall highlight the argument surround by my opinion.

Indeed
, the
first
and foremost reason why I
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believe
that university
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education
is necessary that tutors are available for monitoring the students.
Deeply
, if someone is there to take care the students then they can perform better
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because
teachers
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help
them to overcome their difficulties. There is an illustration that the
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government
is promoting school
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education
in all nations.
Moreover
, another major reason why I
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agree
with this is
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people
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get
job
easily
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because
most of the
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companies
looking for graduates. For an instance, multi-national
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companies
such as
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Wipro
and TCS looking for IT professionals those
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who
are pass out from a reputed
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colleges
with flying
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colours
.

However
, the opponent of the above-mentioned view claim that
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education
is not necessary for the
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success
. To
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begin
with,
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some
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people
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believe
that practical knowledge is necessary for
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success
than theoretical knowledge.
Clearly
, there is a saying that practice
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make
a
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man
perfect which means those
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who
work more will
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help
them to understand more
deeply
about a particular job. They
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believe
that, the world richest
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man
Bill Gates is a college dropper,
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but
his real-life experience
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helps
him to become the wealthiest
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man
in the world. They
also
argue that those
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who
have innate talents can
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success
in their life.
In other words
, proficiency such as singing, drawing is inborn which cannot do anything with education.

Summing up, although a minus group of
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people
contents that citizen can become
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success
without
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education
, I, myself once again restate my opinion that
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people
can
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success
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only
with studying in college for, they
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can able to
acquire a plum job
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because
most of the
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MNCs
looking for graduates.
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IELTS essay UNIVERSITY EDUCATION AND OTHER

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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