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Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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Ever since the evolution began, men were always considered superior and women were considered inferior, this was due to the difference in physical capabilities. Till this day, in many places women are looked down upon and are treated unequally. In my opinion, this is just morally wrong and both men and women should be treated equally and yes, Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. Men and women are obviously born with their own differences, but that should not be a hinderance for any of the genders to achieve something, Men are usually good with physical strength and heavy work whereas women are good with mental solutions, good at nurturing and have a maternal instinct. Even in this day and age women are treated differently and some women even believe that they are inferior, which is completely wrong because women can do everyone and anything a man can do. There were many cases of inequality like, women were not offered a higher level of job, they were not given the right to vote, women earned low salary despite doing the same job as a man. When it comes to universities, for instance in India many women are not fortunate enough to study college and many colleges are biased against them. Although, the gap between educated men and women is getting close, we still have a long road to go through for equality. Women should have the equal opportunity as a man for anything such as a university, work, pension etc. they are as smart as men or they could be even smarter, that depends upon the individual. In a recent study it is proven that women take decisions more safely than men and are also considered to be better investors, they are likely to follow more rules and commit less crime or malpractice in comparison to men. In conclusion, everyone should have an equal chance and opportunity to study whatever they want, regardless of other factors and yes it important for Universities to take the same number of men and women in each major.
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were always considered superior and
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women
were considered
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many
places
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are looked
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are treated
unequally
. In my opinion, this is
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just
morally
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wrong
and both
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men
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should
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equally
and yes,
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Universities
should take the same number of
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men
and
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women
in each major.

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obviously
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differences,
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for any of the genders to achieve something,
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usually
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with physical strength and heavy work whereas
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are
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with mental solutions,
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at nurturing and have a maternal instinct. Even in this day and age
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are treated
differently
and
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some
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women
even believe that they are inferior, which is completely
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wrong
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women
can do everyone and anything a
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can do. There were
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cases of inequality like,
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women
were not offered a higher level of job, they were not
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given
the right to vote,
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women
earned low salary despite doing the same job as a
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man
. When it
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to
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,
for instance
in India
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women
are not fortunate
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enough
to study college and
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colleges
are biased
against them.

Although, the gap between educated
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men
and
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women
is getting close, we
still
have a long road to go through for equality.
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Women
should have the equal opportunity as a
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man
for anything such as a
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university
, work, pension etc. they are as smart as
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men or
they could be even smarter, that depends upon the individual. In a recent study it
is proven
that
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women
take decisions more
safely
than
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men
and are
also
considered to be better investors, they are likely to follow more
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rules
and commit less crime or malpractice
in comparison
to
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men
.

In conclusion
, everyone should have an equal chance and opportunity to study whatever they want, regardless of other factors and yes it
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important
for
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Universities
to take the same number of
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men
and
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women
in each major.
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IELTS essay Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. with this statement?

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