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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree。

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. 。 OJQN
Globally, men and women are equal. Consequently, an identical number of academic seats should be allowed for male and female candidates in universities. I completely agree with this statement. Let's discuss a number of its viewpoints prior to my opinion. Firstly, Education is uniform to all people, without considering age, gender, and ethnicity. It is essential to give priority to women in education, as women can also achieve success in their academics with higher grades and also work as professionals. Secondly, All the universities ought to similar admission for boys and girls to get graduate. For instance, A survey conducted regarding the compared percentage scores of men and women in the global university in 2020. As a result 98% of marks obtained by the girls when compared with boys, this shows the educational ability of the girls is higher than boys. Apart from this, females are well talented and can work in all the fields like males. For example, Women has been working as a pilot for last decade, In developed countries already ought equivalent freedom for men and women in their studies. However, unfortunately, yet a number of countries treated women as below men and only a few seats are allowed for women's education. I suggest, the government should step forward to raise funds for women's education for the development of our country. I conclude education is equal to all people without any priority. Women can also achieve success with high job opportunities. Therefore, a parallel number of admission seats should be allowed for both men and women.
Globally,
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are equal.
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of academic seats should be
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,
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is uniform to all
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people
, without considering age, gender, and ethnicity. It is essential to give priority to
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women
in
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education
, as
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women
can
also
achieve success in their academics with higher grades and
also
work as professionals.
Secondly
, All the universities ought to similar admission for boys and girls to
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get
graduate.
For instance
, A survey conducted regarding the compared percentage scores of
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men
and
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women
in the global university in 2020.
As a result
98% of marks obtained by the girls when compared with boys, this
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shows
the educational ability of the girls is higher than boys. Apart from this, females are well talented and can work in all the fields like males.
For example
,
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Women
has been working as a pilot for last decade, In
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developed countries
already ought equivalent freedom for
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men
and
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women
in their studies.
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of countries treated
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as below
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men
and
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only
a few seats are
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allowed
for women's
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education
. I suggest, the
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government
should step forward to raise funds for women's
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education
for the development of our country. I conclude
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education
is equal to all
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people
without any priority.
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Women
can
also
achieve success with high job opportunities.
Therefore
, a parallel
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number
of admission seats should be
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allowed
for both
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men
and
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women
.
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IELTS essay Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. 。

Essay
  American English
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