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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. JjD6
Have u ever though of being in a class with an equal number of students depending on their gender. This essay will involve several reasons why this idea is not useful. First of all, the university will face some difficulties to ensure the same number of genders in each class. This is because not all learners would prefer to register for a specific class. Individuals usually register and schedule the courses depending on what suits them and what timing they prefer. Some students have work which leads them to register for afternoon classes. Furthermore, students have different hobbies and personality which make them register to a course that they are interested in. For instance, all male gender prefers to study Engineering programs. However, some female gender would like to to study engineering, but because of this rule, the female student might change the program just because there is not enough number of female students. Secondly, ensuring to have an equal number of genders will force the university to open a course with few numbers of students. And this will force some Individuals to be change the course, or be in a waiting list, or even they would delay taking the course which will lead them to not complete the degree within the required years. For example, my friend once told me that in the summer they were only 4 girls in the course. In other words, the class was opened for few students although it was supposed to be opened for at least 15 students. Overall, having an equal number of genders is not a best practice. As many subjects would have less number of students. I significantly disagree with the rule as I have mentioned some of the reasons that will affect the students in many ways.
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depending on their gender. This essay will involve several reasons why this
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idea
is not useful.

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First of all
, the university will face
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difficulties to ensure the same
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number
of genders in each
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class
. This is
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because
not all learners would prefer to
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register
for a specific
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class
. Individuals
usually
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register
and schedule the
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courses
depending on what suits them and what timing they prefer.
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Some
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students
have work which leads them to
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register
for afternoon
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classes
.
Furthermore
,
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students
have
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different
hobbies and personality which
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make
them
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register
to a
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course
that they
are interested
in.
For instance
, all male gender prefers to study Engineering programs.
However
,
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some
female gender would like
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study engineering,
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because of this
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rule
, the female
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might
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change
the program
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just
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there is not
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enough
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number
of female students.

Secondly
, ensuring to have an equal
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number
of genders will force the university to open a
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course
with few
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numbers
of
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students
. And this will force
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some
Individuals to be
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change
the
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course
, or be in a waiting list, or even they would delay taking the
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course
which will lead them to not complete the degree within the required years.
For example
, my friend once
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told
me that in the summer they were
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only
4 girls in the
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course
.
In other words
, the
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class
was opened
for few
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students
although it
was supposed
to
be opened
for at least 15 students.

Overall
, having an equal
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number
of genders is not
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a
best practice. As
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many
subjects would have less
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number
of
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students
. I
significantly
disagree with the
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rule
as I have mentioned
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some of the
reasons that will affect the
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students
in
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ways.
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IELTS essay Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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