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Universities should accept equal amount of male and female students.

Universities should accept equal amount of male and female students. GwlbQ
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who deserve the chance and can you the
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as much as
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. In my opinion I prefer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
as competitive as
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possible
. Give the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
who deserve the chance and can you the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
as much as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
possible
. In my opinion I prefer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
as competitive as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
possible
. Give the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
who deserve the chance and can you the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
as much as
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IELTS essay Universities should accept equal amount of male and female students.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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