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In this contemporary era, due to advancement of technology people use various kind of vehicles on road which has been escalated day-to-day. Some folk believe that government has to pay expenditure on roads for widening it; whereas, others reckon that it is responsibility of car buyers to lavishing for roads. I would like to discuss both these views in trail paragraphs before coming to plausible conclusion. To commence with, the predominant factor which cannot be ignored is about environment because drivers who buy the cars have to pay tax but there are some families who are unable to pay tax more often. As a result, citizens are trying to buy less vehicles and there will be decrease in pollution which emits harmful gases in the air from vehicles and adverse effects on the surrounding will be ameliorated. Moreover, if car buyers will take the responsibility of road spread. Thus, people use communal carpooling. To illustrate, according to the recent survey conducted by the Times Of India in which they concluded that in a year 2017 the ratio of private vehicles had been decreased by 27% because of communal carpooling. However, another pivotal facet of this argument is broden the road is onus of government. Since, public health pay tax on toll plaza which is obvious that government give big roads facilities to them. Furthermore, administration have much ideas about planning road compare to citizen and also government can use modern technology for large scale projects in order to improve road length through which public get help. Last but not the least, people can get out of burden when government take these responsibilities from them and spend money on roads as they wish. In conclusion, it is inferred that, despite of expanding the roads by private vehicles owner in order to ameliorate issues of environmental, communal carpooling. I firmly agree that government should do it for generation tax, new technology, less burden life which is logically accepted.
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people
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various kind of
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on
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road
which has
been escalated
day-to-day.
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folk believe that
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government
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has to
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pay
expenditure on
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roads
for widening it; whereas, others reckon that it is responsibility of car buyers to lavishing for
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roads
. I would like to discuss both these views in trail paragraphs
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before
coming to plausible conclusion.

To commence with, the predominant factor which cannot be
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ignored
is about environment
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because
drivers who
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buy
the cars
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have to
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pay
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tax
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but
there are
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some
families who are unable to
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pay
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tax
more
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often
.
As a result
, citizens are trying to
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buy
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less
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vehicles
and there will be decrease in pollution which emits harmful gases in the air from
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vehicles
and adverse effects on the surrounding will
be ameliorated
.
Moreover
, if car buyers will take the responsibility of
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road
spread.
Thus
,
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people
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use
communal carpooling. To illustrate, according to the recent survey conducted by
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the Times Of India
in which they concluded that in a year 2017 the ratio of private
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vehicles
had
been decreased
by 27%
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because
of communal carpooling.

However
, another pivotal facet of this argument is
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broden
the
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road
is onus of
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government
.
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Since
, public health
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pay
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tax
on toll plaza which is obvious that
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government
give
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big
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roads
facilities to them.
Furthermore
, administration have
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much
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ideas
about planning
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road
compare to citizen and
also
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government
can
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use
modern technology for large scale projects in order to
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improve
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road
length through which public
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get
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help
. Last
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but
not the least,
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people
can
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get
out of burden when
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government
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take
these responsibilities from them and spend money on
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roads
as they wish.

In conclusion
, it
is inferred
that,
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despite of
expanding the
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roads
by private
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vehicles
owner in order to ameliorate issues of environmental, communal carpooling. I
firmly
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agree
that
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government
should do it for generation
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tax
, new technology, less burden life which is
logically
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accepted
.
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IELTS essay Ucch Isiah great office tyre office foul p it ea icon kc WA ta ra sb iron hetero tap XL do EP FL been.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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