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Twenty years from now, the world will be a better place to live in". Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons.

Twenty years from now, the world will be a better place to live in". Give reasons. kbaB2
Hi, my name is Glenn. I'm 15 years old, i live in Da Nang city with my parents. Now, I'm studying at Sky Line school, class 10/1. Today, i'm gonna talk about a topic: "Twenty years from now, the world will be a better place to live in". I think i agree with with this statement. Because our earth is very modern right now. So, twenty years from now, our earth will be more modern than now. . The industry in the earth will be more modern. Many other economic sectors will also develop. People's lives will not be as miserable as they are now. Car industry will have a revolution. I think, in the future we can see a lot of car can fly. And a lot of modern tall building will be built in the future. And people will live in a modern apartments. From these things. i think the world will be a better place to live in the future.
Hi, my name is Glenn. I'm 15 years
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IELTS essay Twenty years from now, the world will be a better place to live in". Give reasons.

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163 words
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