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Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer? n6NYe
it is irrefutable that normal pupils are so talented and intelligent so all over the world so the children has given first priority in education overthan physically and mentally challenged children. Moreover this special children needs extra care and support from the family and teachers. Thus, I firmly opine that, every child needs education for the rudimental growth and development it and no one can left from it even the child is normal or child with disabilities everyone has equal opportunity to get education. I further eloborate my opinion in next paragraphs. The children with disabilities is r can be called as special children as they need special care and treatment. Such a special children may have physically or mentally problems in spite of that they also have special talents. it is a teacher's duty to develop that support such special talent of these special children. In augments, when these children get educated they can expand their skills just like another normal childrens and they also can get employment and can manage themselves financially. So they do not need support from other people. For epitome, in India various blind children schools grants employment programs and skill development programs which help blind children to get employment. However, children with disabilities and mental health problems has required special care and arrangements so they cannot be taught with normal children so they have to be admitted in their special schools. Even sometimes such as children can create consequences to the teacher. As an illustration, mentally challenged children sometimes can not handled by the teacher as per children's behaviour attitude, it is great challenge for teacher. After contempleting all the aspects, physically and mentally challenged children also has the same opportunity and right to the education to eat humble care and support. So they could also stand still in this modern world.
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talented and intelligent
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all over the world
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priority in
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education
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overthan
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mentally
challenged
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.
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children
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extra
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and
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support
from the family and teachers.
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, I
firmly
opine that, every child
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needs
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education
for the
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rudimental
growth and development it and no one can
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left
from it even the child is
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normal
or child with disabilities everyone has equal opportunity to
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get
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education
. I
further
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eloborate
my opinion in
next
paragraphs.

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children
with disabilities is r can
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children
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problems
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also
have
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special
talents.
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it
is a teacher's duty to develop that
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support
such
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special
talent of these
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special
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children
. In augments, when these
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children
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get
educated they can expand their
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skills
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like another
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normal
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childrens and
they
also
can
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get
employment and can manage themselves
financially
.
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they do not
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need
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from other
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people
. For epitome, in India various blind
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children
schools grants employment programs and
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skill
development programs which
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help
blind
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children
to
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get
employment.

However
,
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children
with disabilities and mental health problems has required
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special
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care
and arrangements
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so
they cannot
be taught
with
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normal
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children
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so
they
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have to
be admitted
in their
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special
schools. Even
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sometimes
such as
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can create
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consequences to
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challenged
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can not
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handled
by the teacher as per children's
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behaviour
attitude, it is great challenge for teacher.

After
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contempleting
all the aspects,
physically
and
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mentally
challenged
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children
also
has the same opportunity and right to the
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education
to eat humble
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care
and
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support
.
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they could
also
stand
still
in this modern world.
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IELTS essay Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

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