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past fifty years have
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seen
a significant increase in
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endeavour
of saving endangered
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animal
species from extinction.
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e
there are
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some
valid arguments to the contrary, it is my personal view that
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savi


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First of all
, it is an indisputable fact that maintaining
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animal
diversity has
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a
essential role to play in balancing ecosystem. It is obvious that disappearance of one kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
may have adverse impact on
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othents
and seeds. Insect,
however
, is
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a
essential source of food for birds.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
insect is extinct it
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die
. This fact
strongly
prove that any kind of
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animal
or plan disappear, the whole ecosystem will be
negatively
effected.

Further
and even more
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inportantly
, saving endangered
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animal
species from
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exctintion
foster
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the the
economy.
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Some
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animal
species turn out to be beneficial to human beings. Tiger,
for example
, not
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only
provides us with
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ngs
to us in the long term worth
being taken
into consideration.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that endangered
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animal
species should
be protected
from disappear should
be warranted
.
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IELTS essay TRYING TO SAVE ENDANGEEE?

Essay
  American English
16 paragraphs
236 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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